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Post by Darth Malice on Mar 29, 2019 4:50:33 GMT -5
OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION* Intent: To create a flagship for Darth Malice * Image Source: Here
* Canon Link:N/A * Primary Source: herePRODUCTION INFORMATION
* Manufacturer: Sith Imperial Foundry* Affiliation: Darth Malice * Model: N/A * Production: Unique * Material: Matrix armor TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
* Classification: Corvette * Length: 200m * Width: 111.1m * Height: 33.4m * Armament: Heavy 1x huge weapon slot - Ion Cannon2x Large weapon slots - Turbolaser4x Medium weapon slots - Laser Cannon* Defenses: High - Matrix armor hull, Multi-layered shields, ECM Systems, Hull reinforcements * Fighter Hangar: Average - 1 * Maneuverability Rating: Low * Speed Rating: Low * Hyperdrive Class: Average STANDARD FEATURES* High Armor rating * High Shield Rating * Cargo Capacity: small * Can be flown by a 1-3 man crew. ADVANCED SYSTEMS
* ECM systems * Hull reinforcement Strengths: * Durable * Heavy hitting Weaknesses: * Using all weapons at once can overheat the weapons systems quickly * Low Maneuverability * Relies on fighters for defence until it can get into position to attack Description: An elegant ship for a sith of a more elegant age. The Tormentor is different to other ships as it holds a more streamline design that can cover numerous purposes. The ship could have been outfitted for a trader but instead Darth Malice had the ship solely created for combat. The ship carries a cargo hold that can either carry upto 164 tonnes of cargo or plenty of armaments. The ship was designed to be piloted by 3 people but can be piloted by one lone pilot if required. The ships bridge is spacious and has enough room for an area to relax in if needed, contains crew quarters for 4 people to sleep comfortably.
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Lord Kao
Factory Judge
Mar 18, 2019 7:38:27 GMT -5
Lord of Darkness
Posts: 267
Bio Link: Kao Xusros's Bio
SE Rank: Sith Lord
Title: War Lord
Title: Darksider
Title: Sorcerer
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Post by Lord Kao on Mar 31, 2019 12:16:24 GMT -5
Hello there Darth Malice. I like the idea of a corvette flagship, but there are things which need editing. First of all, either get rid of the etc for the Defenses, or list all of its defenses. I recommend to list all defenses. Another thing, this is a corvette, which supposedly has heavy armament high defenses average maneuverability and an average fighter hanger, and has a high speed rating high armor and shielding and cargo being high. These are all very powerful, and the more weaponry and shielding that a ship has, then the slower it will go. So speed and maneuverability will most likely need to be nerfed a bit if you are to keep the weaponry and shielding high. Second, please link all materials used to their respective links. Overall we just need for there to be more specificalities in type of armor, speed, and weaponry. Darth Malice
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