Mike V'Trechen
Official SWRP Member
Mar 22, 2019 20:36:34 GMT -5
Posts: 89
Bio Link: Mke V Trechen Bio
Title: Warrior
Title: Grey Force User
Title: Assassin
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Post by Mike V'Trechen on Apr 15, 2019 10:20:51 GMT -5
OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION * Intent: This will be the Junior Officer Trial site for The Grey Fire. * Image Credit: N/A, there is not a picture. * Canon: Yes, this is canon. starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Sith_temple_(Mustafar)* Links: starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Star_Wars:_Complete_Locations_(2016)starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Star_Wars:_The_Complete_Visual_Dictionary,_New_Edition SETTING INFORMATION * Structure Name: The Junior Officer Trial Site. (Formerly as the Sith temple) * Classification: Temple * Location: Mustafar = starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Mustafar* Affiliation: Sith = starwars.fandom.com/wiki/SithThe Grey Fire = swrpeu.freeforums.net/thread/261/grey-fire?page=1&scrollTo=647* Accessibility: It is hidden, since it is a trial site. * Description: The planet Mustafar was at one time the site of a Sith sanctuary, a reality understood to the Sith Lord Darth Sidious. The château having a place with Darth Vader was previously the site of the sanctuary. Mike V'Trechen knew that he needed one more trial site. He thought that this would be a good place to do it at. Mike knew that it was damaged, but he wanted to repair it. POINTS OF INTEREST N/A SECURITY It is a none, since this place is hidden. There is no guns or anything. HISTORICAL INFORMATION The planet Mustafar was at one time the site of a Sith safe spot, a reality comprehended to the Sith Lord Darth Sidious. The château having a spot with Darth Vader was beforehand the site of the protected spot. Mike V'Trechen realized that he required one more preliminary site. He felt this would be a decent spot to do it at. Mike realized that it was harmed, yet he needed to fix it.
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Lord Kao
Factory Judge
Mar 18, 2019 7:38:27 GMT -5
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SE Rank: Sith Lord
Title: War Lord
Title: Darksider
Title: Sorcerer
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Post by Lord Kao on Apr 15, 2019 18:20:26 GMT -5
Security cannot be medium if there are no guns or anything... Accessibility does not roll-over into security Mike V'Trechen
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Mike V'Trechen
Official SWRP Member
Mar 22, 2019 20:36:34 GMT -5
Posts: 89
Bio Link: Mke V Trechen Bio
Title: Warrior
Title: Grey Force User
Title: Assassin
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Post by Mike V'Trechen on Apr 16, 2019 9:47:26 GMT -5
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Lord Kao
Factory Judge
Mar 18, 2019 7:38:27 GMT -5
Lord of Darkness
Posts: 267
Bio Link: Kao Xusros's Bio
SE Rank: Sith Lord
Title: War Lord
Title: Darksider
Title: Sorcerer
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Post by Lord Kao on Apr 16, 2019 16:00:25 GMT -5
What do you mean when you say "trial" site?
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Mike V'Trechen
Official SWRP Member
Mar 22, 2019 20:36:34 GMT -5
Posts: 89
Bio Link: Mke V Trechen Bio
Title: Warrior
Title: Grey Force User
Title: Assassin
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Post by Mike V'Trechen on Apr 16, 2019 17:22:04 GMT -5
Lord Kao We hold trials kind of like The Jedi Trials.
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Darth Vyrassu
The Sith Empire
Mar 17, 2019 17:01:47 GMT -5
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SE Rank: Darth
Title: Sorcerer
Title: Darksider
Title: Alchemist
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Post by Darth Vyrassu on Apr 16, 2019 20:41:35 GMT -5
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Mike V'Trechen
Official SWRP Member
Mar 22, 2019 20:36:34 GMT -5
Posts: 89
Bio Link: Mke V Trechen Bio
Title: Warrior
Title: Grey Force User
Title: Assassin
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Post by Mike V'Trechen on Apr 16, 2019 21:54:26 GMT -5
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Mirshko Betna
RPJ
Mar 18, 2019 14:16:55 GMT -5
Posts: 363
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MC Rank: Rally Master
Title: Mandalorian
Title: Grey Force User
Title: Shadow
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Post by Mirshko Betna on Apr 17, 2019 0:25:22 GMT -5
Mike V'Trechen- Location name MUST be changed to Fortress Vader - this is a canon location that you are claiming.
- Please make sure your links are functional.
- What is the purpose of linking the Visual Dictionary?
- Plese correct structure name to "Fortress Vader"
- By listing a Sith affiliation, that is leaving an open invitation to any Sith on the board to visit your planet. It was my understanding that Grey Fire was not Sith Aligned...
- This Canon location is not a secret, it is not hidden. Your submission says it is. Please clarify how this was achieved, and what it would take for someone to gain access to it.
- Description: Please mention the existence of Fortress Vader, and how you came to discover it. Your description MUST reference this.
- Due to this being a Canon location, there were listed Points of interest. These should be included.
- Security: You must clarify this. This is not a hidden location. You must list specific security measures. Please link to Wookieepedia weapons emplacements or Factory approved weapons.
- This is a Conon location, you must expand the history of this location significantly to reflect this.
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